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You came to me cryin,
Just another stranger,
Their plane was on time,
But they didnt come,
Theyd gone to serve,
In a diffrent country,
At last someone came,
Brave enough to tell us
Chorus
He had a good life
Served a single purpose,
He left behind a wife,
But it couldve been worse
And when i look into the eyes of the picture he sent
Ill remember all the good times and wish he hadnt went
We left for my house,
Us two little figures,
The kids' hair was mussed,
How could we tell them,
Some people were kind,
Tried to help us
Many were frightened
For their husbands
Chorus
But I cant change the past
so listen to me,
The only little comfort,
Is that he didnt flee.
- Title: Beautiful Eyes
- Artist: Steihlia
- Description: its a song i wrote in class...hope u recognize it ashley!!yea, its ok but dont make fun of it or make bad comments, just look at it and love it. plus dont try 2 copy it i have a copyright on it 2007
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: song soldier steihlia
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Thorn Of The Sky - 06/08/2009
- I really like,it.
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- Steihlia - 03/07/2009
- oh. that is a good point. srry. i would just rather them not make fun of it bcause those things stick with me my entire life. thanks for the nice comment, btw!
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- tear goddess - 01/07/2009
- It's a very good poem, I liked it. I would still have to say, in your description, if you don't want people saying BAD things, then how will you ever improve? Just think about that. 4/5
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