Leaving

• Artist: TikTokTikTok
• Description: This poem is about how i have to leave my dad when i see him, and how hard it is for me. :(
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: such snow

I only see you for a little bit.
Then it seems the fire is lit.
I enjoy my times that I rarely see you.
Is there anything I could do?
Just to stay around with you?

Now it is my time to go.
I am feeling very low.
My flight is leaving at 12:00 sharp
This pain is leaving a perminent mark.
It's time to say the last goodbyes,
but time will fly,
and I shall see you again.

Comments

[onionio]

I liked it. you can really feel the emotions. I also have divorced parents and have a hard time flying across the country every year, so i can relate.

[TikTokTikTok]

Thanks, I wrote this when I was at my dad's house. Really, it is hard.

[Positive Aspects]

thats really good (my parents r divorced,.....so i know how it feels) that touched my heart!!