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• Artist: XxBeautifulxLiesxX
• Description: it was late,.and i was well idk bored?
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: unknown title

The bloody knife laying in my hand
The red trail leading from the bathroom to the bedroom
Me laying on the floor about to die
Me asking for one last kiss before the devil himself comes to take me away
You trying to choke back tears
You asking me not to go
You trying to clot the blood
Me slowly closing my eyes
You laying there in my blood
My mom accusing you of everything
You fighting with my dad about my mom accusing you
You trying to convince them both that it ain't your fault
You kissing my still lips and saying "i love you"
You taking the bloody knife and slitting your throat
You say your gonna die I'll go with you
My mom dumbfounded
Me and you dead...With a smile on our faces.

Comments

[Inyuashi 23]

It's interesting...I like the plot, and it seems you can improve...I think I'll invite you to a guild or suggest one to show you...So much poetry, it may speed up how fast you improve (that is of course if you write)

[iEatYourCat]

<3 i love it.

[iluvpolkadots]

Maybe something like "leaving together" or along those lines XD Its good. I like these 'types' of poems, they are fun to write ^_^

[KDeath]

now thats love

[wildflower2828]

i love these types of poem