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When you tell me that you love me
Sometimes I just say FINE
When you tell me that you love me
I feel like your just wasting my time
- by ll_Mrs_Black_Hawk_ll |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: I DON'T THINK HE LOVES ME
- Artist: ll_Mrs_Black_Hawk_ll
- Description: when a guy doesn't mean he loves you
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: dont think loves
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Comments (3 Comments)
- vanessa_m - 03/08/2009
- i liked it maybe u should explain why u feel like that instead of having us guess though but wow just add alittle more and i would love to see what u came up with
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- Dorian Wanhope - 12/31/2008
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Well I understand where you are trying to go with this poem and I see how you are trying to keep it short and concise, but this is one of those times when you dont give anything for the person to think about because it is soo short. I think it is a great attempt, but also captilizing the fine doesnt seem necessary. I would say to make it a process. like how at first it made you feel and to what it means now. Instead of going straight for a meaning without anything to hold onto.
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- ll_Mrs_Black_Hawk_ll - 12/30/2008
- plz comment
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