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As i walk through the woods, i look at the sky
I can't hold it in, i begin to cry,
I fall to my knees, with my hands in the mud
The peircing falls out, followed by a thud.
My mind has gone numb, full of bad thoughts
I dont feel to good, i think i was caught,
my white shirt stained red, i think its the blood
Should i scream loud, i dont think i should.
I cant feel the pain and my hands are cold
I havn't lived long, sixteens not old
But I'm not sad, we all have are time
I pull my self up, i feel the cold in my spine.
I feel his bony fingers squeezing my lungs
Out of fear i scream ''i am to young''
But he dosn't care, he stands tall and proud
I think it's time to die ''no screaming aloud''
- Title: Teenage misary
- Artist: SUNTEKE
- Description: not much to say really, i wanted to try something darker, read 'yellow boi' as well and tell me if i should stick to the lighter stuff, your opinion will be appreciated.
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: teenage misary death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dragon and Phoenix - 01/02/2009
- Very well done, I love it. Keep up the good work!
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- Miss Salsa Sam - 01/01/2009
- ...I would like to thank you...because this poem really hits my heart. I think you so keep writing about anything. Its good not to just write about one thing. I really think that this poem has a good meaning... and i totally understand why you picked this topic!
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- TikTokTikTok - 01/01/2009
- omg, that is amazing. seriously... smile
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- XxX-BeTtA-ShAdEz-XxX - 12/31/2008
- that poem is awsome!!
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