The Chronicles of London.Intro

• Artist: Lady Feowlyn
• Description: I spent october living in London and working there, but I hated the town ..
  And decided to express myself and my feelings towards it in poem. I will submit it the way I wrote it - in parts. Depending success of first part I make decision if or not to submit more.
  
  P.S - I do not know why it seemed so gray and lifeless and evil to me, as for I love brittish ppl due their charm ^^.
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: chronicles london feowlyn

DESPAIR.

My tears keep on falling like leaves in the fall
year after year same time it is to wait
after the tortures and happiness all
im filled with unmeasurable hate
towards all who have hurt me all those long years
who are doing it right now
the causes of my fears
all those lies and deceit from day to day
this defeat and broken heartbeat
its all i have to say

LONDON CHRONICLES. INTRO.

This is then the town said to be so damn great
filled with coldness cruelty and merceless hate
Streets stuffed with ppl ordered by traffic signs show
no respect to them - dumb sheeple! fallen all so low
The glory and history beautiful places?
kings and queens all so mighty and nobel?
open your eyes look around and tell me what you see
close your eyes listen and tell me what you feel

becos all that i see now is chaos and pain
wind taking over and town soaked in rain
rain of the tears of the homeless out there
their prayers and scent of despair
so where is this greatness then now - tell me where!?

and all tht i feel is coldness in air
doom above my head - oh vanity fair?
this wind of pure evil and nothing more to mention
Big Bens famous silhouette?
Trust me - no good intention

To be continued . . .

Comments

[PlantedPage]

its ok but besides a couple things it would be perfect 4/5

[pure seyelance]

...okay? well it is alright 4/5*