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How could one have such a horrible fate?
He lured me in like he had bait.
His exterior is beautiful, smooth, and charming.
Yet his heart is cold, unsensitive, and alarming.
He always was the same on the inside; mean and rusted.
I was betrayed again, know he cannot be trusted.
I warn you, I thought he was perfect; as you do.
He stuck me to him like he had glue.
He asks you what you like, what you fear, and how you hurt
just to get your weak spots, he'll even flirt.
There is no way to prove this except show you my pain.
Don't be fooled, or this letter will all be in vain.
What a horrible and deluded plan he has set.
He caught me like he had a net.
Oh, young and foolish child.... I cry for you.
You are so ignorant and clueless... I was too.
You will see my discriptions fit him.
Please do me a favor, and don't be his next victim.
- by RisexWithxthexDead |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: His Next Victim
- Artist: RisexWithxthexDead
- Description: True... I warned her...she didn't listen... and she payed.
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: next victim
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ll Tears of Joy ll - 03/05/2009
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This poem is excellent
It flows perfectly
The wording is good
Are you professional?
5/5
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- XxGothicXxManXx - 01/07/2009
- really great u must be a natural poet
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 12/28/2008
- please tell me what you think =]
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