And suppose

• Artist: ElvenFalcon
• Description: A poem I just did.
  I was bored :P
  If you enjoyed, comment and/or rate!
  I know it hardly counts as a poem. Me and my guy friend went through this and it DID hurt, i broke, i shattered - and so did he. but .. i passed his test
• Date: 12/27/2008
• Tags: suppose boys friends fall broke

you came up to me
and you threw insults at me
unwanted debris

and suppose I had slapped you back
just to break my own fall
and you cracked your back
and I walked away
satisfied

but..
I didn't slap you
I hit the ground
full force
and my life was askew

and I won't deny it
It hurt me
It broke me
It shattered me

but..
look at us now
you know why we're like this?
beacause I
hurt
broke
shattered

you know why else?
you never told me

but..
i'm sure you
Hit the ground
and you
hurt
broke
shattered

because we were trying
to protect
something that had already
broken

and we both
realised
we were wrong

And now
I hear in my mind
you
congratulating me
for passing your test

Comments

[Mud99]

I know much of pain, You are far more interesting than most Falcon.

[Jeyrin]

I like it how you said "we were trying to protect something that was already broken". The poem DOES NOT go with the song I'm listening to right now, though ^_^ I'm listening to "Save you" by Simple Plan. Well, 4/5. Follow this link to go to the gallery of my mule so you can rate back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gallery/?uid=12171869

[whitejade13]

Oh well this is lovely. I LOVE it! 5/5 smile