Darkness

• Artist: Pandaki-chan
• Description: the basic thing to say about this poem is its about my death i wrote this in third grade hopefully i remember it thats about it hope you like it.
  
  
  ~ten_ten1415~
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: darkness

I feel a ring of darkness surrounding me I
can't see,everything is going to a blur.

I can see now,I see bombs falling down from the
sky they're so close to hitting me i might die.

Today is the day I die no one can help me
now oh I see something else its me.

I'm digging my own grave, as I do this I am
dying and suddenly I get hit by a bomb and
fall to my death.

In the grave I fall and die now here I lie
and die from thy bomb.

Comments

[ChaoticMortality]

*cough* emo *cough* and for that U get 5/5 and c'mon cheer up it's almost christmas

[chibi guy3]

wow,me too.most of the time i feel like this.but instead of anyone helping me.no one cares about me.

[marryrose23]

awsome smile

[Pandaki-chan]

yea i always feel this way

[marryrose23]

awsome smile

[Sasuke_Alternate]

interesting...thats how i feel everytime im feeeling emo emo