Waking Up

• Artist: nangal
• Description: I wrote this after talking to my friend, who died shortly after.
  So, this is partially from a song I was listening to, and partially my own.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: wake love broken death

You rode a plane out of my life
I wish you could've stayed
More than this I wish you could've seen my face
When I hung up the phone that horrid day

I'll do anything for you,
Kill anyone for you.

I've gotta leave myself intact
'Cause you will be coming back.
In a phrase to cut these lips,
I love you.

The morning will come
In the press of every kiss
With my head upon your chest
Where I will annoy you
With every waking breath
Until you decide to wake up.

I've earned through hope and faith
The curves around your face
That I'm the one you'll hold forever.
If morning never comes for either one of us,
Then this I pray to you wherever.

I'll do anything for you.
This story is for you.
('Cause I'd do anything you want me to... for you.)
I'll do anything for you,
Kill anyone for you.

I gotta leave myself intact
'Cause you won't be coming back.
In a phrase to cut these lips,
I loved you.

The morning will come
In the press of every kiss
With my head upon your chest
Where I will annoy you
With every waking breath
Until you decide to wake up.

The morning will come
In the press of every kiss
With my head upon your chest
Where I will annoy you
With every waking breath
'Til you decide to wake up.

["Be strong, and happy. I'll always love you. I promise."]

Comments

[ExSoldier13]

amazing and sad simutaniously 5/5

[nangal]

Poems don't have to rhyme. Free verse and blank verse are types of poems in which there is no organized, rhyming, or metrical lines. All writing styles are different, depending on how you want the poem to look, sound, feel, and portray emotion to. I don't like rhyming poems, they feel too generic, like something you'd find in a Hallmark card; so my writing style is free/blank verse. If you don't like it, that's your opinion.

[iiMisaki]

IT"S NOT RHYMING!!!