Not Fair/ With This Knife

• Artist: Lily Bo Billy
• Description: These are two poems I wrote this weekend, that I'm really proud of. Hope you like! (Oh, by the way: The second one With This Knife does NOT mean I'm going to commit suicide!)
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: fair

It's not fair it's not right
That I can't sleep at night
Images of you fill my dream
All I want to do is scream
Some things you can not be changed
This is so deranged
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With this knife I will end my live all the constant sorrow,
My life will not have a tomorrow,
When my life does end,
I hope the world will bend,
Bend so everything will be alright,
My life will end tonight,
The darkness in the sky,
Can not compare to your eye,
I want to say good bye,
As I see my life flash before my eye...

Comments

[twilightfanforever13]

love ut!

[Havatara]

Awww, so sad!! But in the first stanza, puncuation, and in the second you DON'T HAVE TO HAVE A COMMA AFTER EVERY LINE. But the message was clear and it was well written.