The Eyes of a Lover

• Artist: Mischiefwulf
• Description: A poem I wrote for my true lover when I find him someday....
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: eyes lover love kiss

Look into his eyes
Does he love you back?
Look deep

The gentle careses of his choclate eyes swarm with passion at your gaze
You can see his overwhelming need to protect you
And the mischievious twinkle with his beautiful stare
No matter how far you look you can never find the bottom of his endless eyes
And you never will
For he is your true lover
He will never leave you
He will never stop thinking your beautiful
He will always stay awake just to watch you sleep
You will never get tired of hearing his "I love you."
And he would die for you

As his stunning face turns into a smile he kisses you gently and you know that you have just looked into the eyes of a true lover

Comments

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

I agree with gaby who gives a ******** aba spelling.
It was amazing, I love it i almost cried.
Its deep and moving and btw Alitare no one gives a crap what you say and if u hav nothin nice to say why dont u just keep ur trap shut?

Everyone else agree's that it was amazing and its got a meaning so deep thats it hurts and hits home how much you need someone to love. and how she expressed it in this poem was amzing.

[Xx Kiki xxX]

forget abot Alitare's comment i thoght that was amazing who gives a s**t abot spelling and grammar its the friggin poem that matters very well done once again mischiefwlf good poem.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I forgot to add, you also used the wrong "your", it should have been "you're" It is also repetitive and boring. Please learn to grasp deep coherent thoughts.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I like your imagery...somewhat. I would give you a 2/5, but you misspelled "caresses" 1/5!

[Zaraxivus66]

It expresses feeling and thought was also present in this particular piece, I like it and I believe your True lover will too.