Poison Dart

• Artist: Twilight_Juliet101
• Description: i am writting more dark stuff says mi famliy. i wonder if it is true?
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: poison dart

The Poison Dart comes after me, the green tip mocking me
The pain that come thru my fallen brothers bodies, makes me sick
I can feel the air, rushing past me
I can hear those murderer's voices laughing at me
I can see the arrow coming after me, but i cant move
I can only see one thing, at the edge of that arrow that is
It is a picture of your fallen body, covered in blood
I try to scream, it never comes out
I fell like this is the only way out of this world
To join him in a never ending rest
But when i open my eyes, im in my bed
Then i see what happened, you died five months ago
And i am only wishing i had gone with you.

Comments

[armygirlspirit]

I loved this :3 I also have problems spelling. it sucks because it holds me back from entering my larger works on Gaia, but more power to you for posting it anyway* check out my work I could use some input on my poems ;3

[XxCookieRawrzxX]

Beautiful

[Sparkly Tits]

read mines?
http//www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101015989

[Sparkly Tits]

wow im the person that took the dart. i would do that for friends and family heart

[Twilight_Juliet101]

lol, i do hav spelling problems......... (letters mock mi!)

[Charlie Loves Apples]

Some spelling errors but..it's lovely and has meaning.

[Lawlz_master101]

but... i'm right here... typing... *touches face* im solid! see! *runs into wall* ok... dead now...