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Surrounded by darkness
drowning in pain
smothered in silence
held down by these chains
tighter they wrap
you're gasping for air
you can't catch your breath
now overwhelmed with despair
feeling the pressure
crying the tears
left hopeless and broken
for your screams no one hears
feeling so abandoned
trying not to cry
trying not to think of
how bad they want you to die
out of desperation
you drag a blade across your wrist
making it sink deeper
for you know you won't be missed
blood running from the wounds
your wrist innocent and scarred
the proclein sink turns crimson
then you suddenly hit the floor hard
pain now easing softly
razor blade still in hand
you hope they're finally happy
for your death went just as planned.
- Title: Pain
- Artist: McHuggles
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Description:
well its just a poem about bullying and what it can do.
please comment your thoughts but please dont be rude about it.
i apologize for the spelling errors and grammatical misfortunes you may come across while reading my poem. - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: pain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- i-luv-2-luagh-at-death - 08/10/2009
- it would sound amazing out loud and was very real
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- Etoile Sorbet - 12/09/2008
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This poem is powerful; I like it a lot.
Much better with better grammar and spelling...and capital letters... but, hey. It's still great.
It gripped me.
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- XxemotessalovesyouxX - 12/06/2008
- wow thats awsome 5/5
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