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Our Rose
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I compare our love
To that of a rose, fragile and gentle.
Though now your love burns,
burns with the intencity of a thousand and one suns,
As you begin to open up
I begin to understand
Every little mistake you've done
you've place trust within my hands
Trust that I shall never let go.
Though the Rose that is our love
continues to open and grow,
Blooming more eligant each day
The more you say the less I wish to know.
Our love has now reached is breaking point.
Our Rose is at full bloom.
Though that may be so, it can only take so much.
I feel as thought the end is coming very, very soon
Our Rose now falling apart.
One petal followed by another.
Soon our love has disappeared
Along with the belated summer.
- by Arrancar Abila Karime |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Our Rose
- Artist: Arrancar Abila Karime
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Description:
I wrote this for a class assignment. Everyone I let read it wanted a copy.
I figured why not share it with my fellow gaians! - Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: rose love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- queen of naughty - 06/18/2009
- it's so beautifal it really makes me think of the love between my boy friend and me
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- Dayzheart - 02/01/2009
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beautifal i love it so dramatik ( i hope i wrote it right)
big huge 5 - Report As Spam
- Kanashii Aiyoku - 11/27/2008
- ~sigh~ Abila-san's a drama queen...
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- Arrancar Abila Karime - 11/27/2008
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ARIGATOU ANE-CHANS!!!
-tears up as rose petals fall in background- - Report As Spam
- Kanashii Aiyoku - 11/27/2008
- Now that I read it over again, I feel some sort of breaking in my heart. That was a FANTASTIC poem Abila-san.
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- Shirahime Yamaichidou - 11/26/2008
- -claps- BEAUTIFUL ABI-CHAN!
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- Arrancar Abila Karime - 11/26/2008
- NO STEALING!
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