control

• Artist: NevaStopGoing_X
• Description: just read this...you will understand my feelings....
  btw comment this and my other peices of work
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: control

It seems so weird to me....
life and it's weird ways
one minute you are happy and full of laughter
the next you wanna stay in a corner away from the world
you wanna be friends with some one
then you want to make fun of them
But theres always that question people seem to always ask...
What do I really want?
it seems so weird that they ask this...
because you are suposed to control your life not have it control lyou

Comments

[BattleStarPicketFence]

If you put this in a contest, they would not even consider it, because you use "u" instead of "you". Please use proper English. This is a Writing forum, not a chat speak forum. The content would be better if it was longer and more descriptive. But your perception may give you great potential.

[II-i-Epic-Blood-Angel-II]

You Should Put This In A Contest Or Something I Understand It Completly