Death

• Artist: Tdog323
• Description: A poem I wrote
• Date: 11/21/2008
• Tags: death deep dark darkness

Death……

Death ends all that’s alive
It is something no one survives
When I am gone
Do not weep
Or be sad
Never forget me
Keep my memories close to your heart
And I will forever be with you
No matter what
Don’t be afraid
We will meet again
Through the cold touch of death
Our bodies may be side by side
Or miles apart
But our souls are forever entwined
For all of time

Comments

[BiggieSmall123]

It sounds more like a letter than a poem.
Hm, i dont know- it just seem to describe what death is, not much feelings or emotions in it but I liked the directness.
so: 5/5