Morphing moment

• Artist: Kitty Stew
• Description: this is the tale of a woman lost within a life untrue to who she is
  then from all that happens she blooms into a beautifully dangerous creature
• Date: 11/14/2008
• Tags: morphing moment

anger and hatered long thought lost
came to me upon the frost
of loss and confusion
creating contusions
to tear away this fragil illusion
tears were first in a list of follies
that remade this empty world of hollys'
you think it a joke, you think it a game
you think cuz you know me
that i'll just stay the same
well what of this creature
who grew from this pain
who has a new traits for holly to gain
she wont back down from what you've done
her hackels are raised and to her this is fun
she'll rip through your flesh if ye be dence
and try to close her within this fence
of words without actions, truth filled with lies
thoughts so selfish you care not if she cries
so world you are warned of this trechorous beast
for tonight she is freed and on you we shall feast

Comments

[the_weird_1]

Ryhymes well enough, my only criticism is the length of the lines. I feel that the lines that rhyme together aren't the same length and don't feel that they are 'together'.