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Can't you see?
cant you see that this is only the beginning?
only the beginning, will this ever end?
I don't believe you see
prove it to me
it's in front of your face, you glance, and say nothing
you need to see the problems you caused
fix this, or see me die inside
what you see is only the facade
see past my cover,
look at the story
then read between the lines
see the lines there?
they are because of you, not for you
you ask what's wrong
don't ask
find the source,
it's you
you caused this
don't ask whats wrong
the girl you're with
I ignore her
she is no good
what does she give you that I didn't
I gave you everything
I gave you truth
I gave you my love
all I got was stories
lies
I know now
that I wasn't worth the truth
so don't say you are sorry
keep your apologies
keep your pity
I don't want it
I don't need it
for pity I have my friends
for apologies I have my razor
don't you see this is only the beginning?
you caused this
now end it
or I will
finish it
or you wont get a reply
only a meek nod
or a cold shoulder
your girl will get absolutely nothing
from me
all she will get
a glare
a growl
nothing more
nothing less
fix this
I have my razor for pity
I have my razor for apologies
with blood running down my arm,
will you stop it?
or will it take more?
deeper cuts?
longer cuts?
pick your choice
or I will
can't you see this?
can't you see this is ONLY the beginning?
this wont end until you end it
or I will end it
- by Confictura |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/13/2008 |
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- Title: Broken heart and deadened soul
- Artist: Confictura
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Description:
this is what i felt when my boy friend broke up with me..
all he gave me was lies, and i gave him my heart, the truth...
and all i got was absolutely nothing but bliss for the 2 and 1/2 weeks i was with him....
not even....
comment please..and positive criticism..this came from my heart.... - Date: 11/13/2008
- Tags: lies
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Diablo Wicked - 07/06/2009
- I'm not one for poems since I can't understand them, but this was pretty damn violent. I under stood it quiet well :3
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- clumsy-story of my life - 11/17/2008
- Yes i love that it came from the heart and it shows how you feel! check out my poem called Crying. and some of my other ones to.
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- Confictura - 11/16/2008
- yeah... does anyone like it??
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- Erin_Krushelniski_2007 - 11/16/2008
- I'm glad you added this so others could see the truth! I write poems and songs when I'm sad or angry and it is a good way to let it all out! It is well done!
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