life hurts

• Artist: Nizhoni_Kun
• Description: my first poem my mom found it in a box and i desided to post it..................
  i dont know look and see what do you think..........................
• Date: 11/11/2008
• Tags: life

life hurts
don't let it become a vurse
please let me help you understand
my legs still can't stand
i would spell it out for you if i could
i realy would
life hurts
noone could make it worse
wops spoke to sune
someone burnt the moon
later
talk to you soon...........
redface redface redface redface arrow

Comments

[iBunior]

You spelled alot of things wrong.....
It doesnt look neat and pretty...
Its suppose to be organized and make some sense.....
-_-