i want to wait

• Artist: Afterlove2death
• Description: I wrote this when me and a friend figured out that we really liked each other. but he can't d8 until hes 16 so i said i would wait. and then he left. and i kept his promise. but as time went by more people headed my way.... i wanted to wait i really did.... but the more guys i saw, the more i liked.
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: want wait love depressed

I want to wait,
I really do.
Waking up every morning,
I only think about you.

Maybe today,
maybe tomorrow.
That's all that runs through my mind.
Maybe now.

My knives are rusting from the tears
Running down my face.
Their rusting from the time just sitting there.

No blood will be dealt.
Not today, maybe tomorrow.
That's all that runs through my head.
Not today, not tomorrow.

I can't wait no more,
I need to choose.
A broken arm or a torn up heart?

Please make up my mind for me.
Fore if i do,
only more tears will fall.

But i will have to wait more anyways.
Only time will heal these wounds.

And only time will tell me if you are right.
I can't wait!
Either you or the knife.
I have chosen but what about you?

Comments

[Seatana_Dea]

=]] its good

[End~Moraine]

Some grammar issues, but other than that, it's alright. Thank god it's not totally cliche like most poems here in the arena.

[Afterlove2death]

hey pplz. please comment. i would like to know what you think