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Under the setting sun,
in the shade of the Ginko trees.
I can hear the smooth sound
of the crystal clear waterfall.
I wait for the stars to come out.
I wait to see the big pale moon.
I wait to see you, the perfect person in my life.
All the things around me,
that calm me and make me happy.
That reassure me that there
will be a tomorrow, are there, but the one
When the moon comes out
it all seems so incomplete,
without you there besides me.
At that moment in time under
the shade of the Ginko trees, and
listening to the smooth water fall.
Something seems to be missing.
Just one thing. You.
I didn't want to wait for you,
but neither did I want to go find you,
for fear that we would never lay eyes again.
But then I see my fears were nothing,
as you come out from behind a Ginko tree.
Your dark brown eyes, percing the meaning in my very soul.
Your lips so perfect in shape and color that no ones can compare.
I've missed you all that you were gone.
It's felt so long, that you seemed like a dream,
that turned into my worst nightmare.
But now it's a dream, and I have no more
fears because now you are there to make it alright.
My world is balance when I'm with you,
a balance that no evil in the world could ever sway.
Your by my side now, and thats all that matters.
Just please I beg, don't leave again.
Don't leave me under the shade of the Ginko trees,
listening to the smooth crystal clear water fall.
Don't leave me there to wait for the stars,
and the moon. Don't let me wait any longer for you.
- by verisia213 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: Love Story (i guess)
- Artist: verisia213
- Description: Like I've said in all the other poems that I've submitted, I'm extereamly new at this. Hopefully getting input from other people will make me better. This kind of explains something that my friend is going through. The guy she loves ( and yes, he loves her back) are trying to work through obsticals, and though this isn't totally all the obsticles, this is one they had a while back.
- Date: 11/05/2008
- Tags: peace last
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lionhearted Sam - 11/12/2008
- I'm not much for love, but good job. This is Munchlax Sam commenting back. please come and see the rest of my gallery. 5/5
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- Insane Jester646 - 11/06/2008
- Other than that, this is a nice piece of work you have here
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- Insane Jester646 - 11/06/2008
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Your poem is pretty good. The way you put it together is good.
i would suggest you add more rhythm to some of your poems if you plan to type more.., but that is for another kind of poem, but you should try it, it can be a good way to learn your way of poetry. =P - Report As Spam