My Soul: Now Vacant - Do ...

• Artist: Gris-Gris182
• Description: Written at 11:28pm Oct/7/2008
• Date: 10/07/2008
• Tags: empty lost hate gothemo

My Soul : Now Vacant - Do What You Will

These Feelings will not change
This pain it shall remain
Blinding tears, retrace the years
Will i ever be the same?

The deadned heart i lock inside
Loves only in hopes to be revived
My single regret, is evrey breath
It kills to stay alive

My used up body is all that exists
Empty and hollow, void of purpose
My laughter holds anger, My eyes beg for death
What happned to the person i once was,
and is there anything left?

In my Reclusion, i brood and realise
the person i was, has long since died
And this mask i wear, is the cross i bare,
Im only here, becaue you said
Im still there

Comments

[C a n ii B u l]

this is really good. smile please comment back on my latest post ^^ thnk yuh! great great poem! 7/5 =P

[S Is For Seizures]

Good points, but there are some spelling and grammar errors. Random capital words. Are they like that for a reason, or does it not matter? "had long since died" sounds better. But, I do like what you are saying. Why do you not capitalize I?