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He is my crush
crushing me
turing my blood in to slush
will i stay free
when i looked at him
he finly looked back at me
then he spoked
and are frindship began
we talked
we giggled
then he said something
to me that took my breath away
Now holing hands together
we stand
with eachother
then somthing happned
the school locked down
we had a man with a gun came
with us outside
the last thing i heard was a BoOM
and him saing "i love you"........
- Title: Together at last
- Artist: Nerdy_Fox
- Description: THEY BOTH ............ DIED!!!!! T.T
- Date: 10/07/2008
- Tags: together last
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SquidIt - 10/16/2008
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ARGH what the buckk...
so many spelling mistakes! - Report As Spam
- mexicantacos2003 - 10/16/2008
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well with the ending ruined i must incline to the rest of the poem
it leaves you to your imagination
which is what a poem does
"expect the unexpected"
but you told us off
so keep the ending quiet until someone asks???
who dies?? and you reveal the best part of the poem - Report As Spam