Out of Options

• Artist: The Original Waffle
• Description: I went through this big stage in my life where I was really depressed all the time, I'm ok now, but it's a good poem, in my opinion. Tell me what you think!
• Date: 10/04/2008
• Tags: options

Somebody help me,
I can't do this anymore.
My depression's taking over,
And my sanity's on the floor.

I don't know what to do,
In this crazy world of mine.
I can't trust anyone anymore,
And I'm anything but fine.

I can't live like this anymore,
With the yelling and screaming.
And every time I turn my back,
There's more lying and decieving.

My depression's taking over,
Like a war within my mind.
Help's the one thing that I seek,
But its the one thing I cant find.

I don't know what to do,
I'm out of options here.
All I can do ids sit and watch,
My sanity disapear.

Comments

[Lady Erudessa]

I really could identify with the poem which I think most of poetry should do for the reader.
You captured the essence, or the meaning of depression really well with simple words.
Very good!

[HoshiXXMori]

i think we all go through a stage in our lives when we feel like this
in fact, i kind of feel like that right now...

anyways, u depicted it really well, 5/5

[Scarletgreen]

That really is what I feel like, although I'm moving out of it. The Poem's Beautiful.
5/5 because I understand.