- Slowly I breathe looking at the ceiling i sleep olny a short time . i think alot my brain never shuts down as i run RPGs in my head. I almost never truly sleep. So i lay here. I live in darkness, like a vampire scared of the light Loneliness is my life every one can't see it . No one really cares if i'm in pain. They see only a part of me . I'm a falling angel, with no path accept the path I make. For I am the angel of Death.
- by deathdragon009-alucard |
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- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: fallin angel
- Artist: deathdragon009-alucard
- Description: dark
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: fallin angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shibu Mizaku - 03/12/2012
- Eh... It's not really good :/
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- MyMindIsAWeapon - 10/14/2011
- it's a little awkward that you threw the word RPG in a really dark poem, but you gave a lot of effort to write this and it didn't go to waste, it was good, but try to remember that there isn't a way your writing has to sound, there is just the way you want it to sound. You clearly have great words stored in your head, now try to bend them to the will of your voice. Keep writing, you have talent biggrin
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- Blades_VS_Guns - 10/15/2010
- Erm... ok. At least u tried.
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- vampgirl55 Rocks - 07/09/2010
- i loved it do u have more ???
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- Coolyei - 06/27/2010
- Dude. I don't see how RPG's and being an angel of death relate, and I'm sort of confused how anyone else does. I'm sorry, but 2/5 for a confusing jumble of words.
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- skitty123456789 - 06/22/2010
- I love this so much!
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- lightraven26 - 06/16/2010
- i agree and i'll love it.
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