A wish too many

• Artist: Online Violation
• Description: This was actually a poem when I was going through depression. Which lasted about two years so it's hard to say exactly how old this is. Although it most likely dates back to around June. PLEASE ASK if you want to use any of my work, don't just take it!
• Date: 09/04/2008
• Tags: wish many

Oh how I wish I could sit out in the rain
and not feel this miserable pain.
Feel your fingers through my hair
instead of being in this nightmare.

Understand the reason why
all the liars seem to deny.
Find the hidden answer
to why you flow through my veins like cancer.

Discover what is being strong
and figure out why everything goes wrong.
Speak how I feel
and actually feel it's real.

Count all the stars in the sky
and find out why we can still see them after they die.
Run into the distance
explore your own absence.

There are just so many things I wish
hoping my dreams wont vanish.
Whether it's a kiss
or something amiss all of this

Comments

[kevin90210]

one of the best poems i have seen

[Desdemona Aieria]

I think you have amazing potential, but try writing some unstructured, unrhyming work. You have some beautiful ideas and visuals here, but it feels a little restricted to fit into the scheme you chose for it. Keep writing! 5!

[Gene_starwind33]

I like it, i think youd like mine too.

[bluebird94]

me like! smile