His Decaying Soul

• Artist: candylicious watermelon
• Description: A weird poem I wrote about 3:00 am yesterday. I usually don't write poetry in this format, so this is a first for not rhyming. I know it doesn't make a lot of sense to others, but there actually is meaning behind the sentences. Enjoy!
• Date: 08/11/2008
• Tags: hisdecayingsoul

You stand above your withering soul
The swollen eyes of your death has come
To watch over you, to watch over you
To watch over you and your decaying body

The blind eyes look upon your end
Searching for a new beginning of the gone
And who are you, and who are you
And who are you the death seeks upon

The gems of the shining reeped from the dark
Black lies are planted on perpetual song
Where are you, where are you
Where are you and every precious diamond

Viruses littering the wandering minds
Of the lost, forgotten, and broken souls
There watching you, there watching you
There watching you abandon them with your red hands

But now your watching the broken above
As darkness slowly eats away at your soul
Goodbye you, goodbye you
Goodbye you they chant as enter empty darkness

Comments

[mysticrydder]

a couple of grammatical errors, but that was deep. was it about betrayal, murder, ghost of someone murdered? or all of them combined? i know whats its like not being able to sleep. its like midnight right now and i cant sleep. i should work on homework. *ponders the thought then groans*

[xsilent guardian angelx]

one who can write this good in the morning must've been lost in deep though. despite the reason you are very talented ^^ good job

[KnighTDreameR]

Its good...could u make the font a little bigger so that we can read it smile

[Madd Fail]

I love it! True genus, it sounds like my thoughts, It makes sense to me.