H.O.R.S.E

• Artist: Ellie Nash_x
• Description: Inspired by the death of a show horse. I loved her, I rode her, and now I miss her. This is my second in the areas, so, please be fair!
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: horse

H is for the hounor demanded in his eyes
O: in them lies an orange flame that kindles as he dies
R is for respect that every equine held for him
S because he knew his place and, but still he could not win
E: enduring his hard life until his days are through
He lived it to the fullest, but fullest was not true

Comments

[Paige Teh Stalker]

Very intresting- its quite good

[ZeckWars]

i liked it smile

[Takorokku]

interesting and a bit sad
but good work^^
4/5

[Atraente]

Yes, I like it. I especially like the line for the O.
Keep it up.

[BitterYetSweet]

interesting i like the rhyming and the style