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It's that funny little feeling
Everytime you touch me
Heart beating out of my chest
With every look and glance
I promised you
And I'll never leave here
Spend forever in your arms
My fallen angel
On the asylum floor
I'm not comfortable with myself
I never have been
But it doesn't matter
You take away the feelings
Of self doubt
And dissidence
You're all that matters
All else is nothing
I promised you
And I'll never leave here
Spend forever in your arms
My fallen angel
On the asylum floor
Too perfect, too good to be true
I couldn't imagine
This life without you
Forever, you're the only one
Couldn't imagine
Breaking the promise
To the end of the world
And further beyond
Searching for perfection
In front of my eyes
The whole time
I opened my eyes
And drowned in yours
There's more things wrong with me
Than you could ever know
It would take years
To explain it to you
Just tell me that it's alright
You're ******** up too
We'll be insane together
On the asylum floor
I promised you
And I'll never leave here
Spend forever in your arms
My fallen angel
On the asylum floor
It would kill me to let this go
- by Icka The Fox |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: On the asylum floor
- Artist: Icka The Fox
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Description:
One of my older works, and yet one of my favorites I've ever written. Sorry about the somewhat darkness of it, and the uneven rhythm. As always, please judge fairly!
OMG OH NOEZ I didn't notice the curse word in this one until after I submitted it! I am so sorry Gaia! Please don't judge me too harshly for this! - Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Master Demonslayer - 07/21/2008
- I rather liked it.
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- Atraente - 07/17/2008
- Yeah, I agree with all the other comments. It fits perfectly. Great job
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- ekitten614 - 07/16/2008
- Wow. It's really great! You don't even notice the uneven rhythm, and the curse word fits right in with the mood. Wow.
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- Lady Darkshadow Firefly - 07/15/2008
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wow...i really like it. nothing wrong with a dark poem...sometimes they are the best.
"There's more things wrong with me/
Than you could ever know"
i think that line is my favorite, and one most of us can relate too... - Report As Spam
- ThePerpetualMotionMachine - 07/15/2008
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1st comment!
I love it.
It reminds me of some of my own work *smile*
5 stars for you! - Report As Spam