DARKNESS FALLS

• Artist: lvl one
• Description: this is sum thing i just came up with
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: dark

in the dark the boy will play
in the dark the boy plays all day
in the dark the boy plays and plays

in the dark the boy will stay

Comments

[SpiritWeasel]

The beginning seems to not evoke any sense of meaning yet the end concludes with a statement that creates a message... Ideally I would say 4.5/5 but I'm unable to give you such a score so 4/5.