Forbidden Love

• Artist: parkerAlice
• Description: Just a poem about love. Not my best I don't think, tell me your ideals, be truthful :D thanks.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: forbidden love

You and me;
We're just another forbidden fantasy;
Everytime I close my eyes;
Everytime you tell me lies;
It seems like everyday is the last day ever;
Knowing that our love is not forever;
When we live in a world where babies being born is the start of a new beginning;
And death means the end of something very special;
We used to be friends;
But now the fun starts to end;
Cause it's time to give up;
What we were;
Is what we used to be;
Now is now;
So you should know that I think we should break-up;
Cause we should just give up;
Cause you know that we didn't work out... together;
Cause some love is not forever.

Comments

[babychick551]

this is rily good^^

[KittyKinenbi]

I like it! It's pretty good!
5/5- I saw no major grammar or spelling errors, which made me happy~

[Death By Proxy Server]

if this is your first one.......then its really good......if it isnt then DAMN!

[ll W E i R D - G A S M ll]

wow that is awesome [:
at first i thought that it would be bad. but yeww got meh there [:
woah..sound kinda like a poem i once wrote..
+&&* yeww slid the rhymes right in there too [:
its excellent [:
i rate 5/5

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[Katrika]

I think sometimes love isn't forever. People do fall out of love, you know. Sometimes treasuring something isn't enough to keep it close.

[Y u r a l r i a]

okay love is forever, If you do treausure it. You should read one of Nichloas evans The Smokejumper.

[E d i b l e x]

lovvin' it.