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Blood Of A Moth, Tears Of The Wordl 07/23/08
By Devin Kruljac Truessence
I've stepped on a Moth and cried because of it,
But no tears have I shed for a lone, dead, stranger of a soldier.
For my eyes rain for the Spirits of the Innocent and for great loss,
As well as the Pools of Blood beneath them.
And when the tears of the Silent befallen into those pools,
Tears more clear and more pure than any ocean current,
All that is left,
Is Red.
Will the World cry for their loss?
Will the Tears dilute the Blood to the point where,
We can see the reflections of our souls as we mourn?
Will the Pools of Blood whisper to us,
As if to ask...
Why cry when we are the cause?
And when Our Rain rids those Pools of Red,
Will we find Our Only Answer.
We cry in hopes to change this world,
To change us,
So the Blood of the Innocent and the Tears of those who mourn,
Evaporate into the sun-lit sky.
So the only Rain there is to see,
Are the tears of happiness and forgiveness from the clouds,
And the only Red there is to see,
Is the bright, translucent red of the Rainbow,
Left behind from the tears we shed,
So we may look toward a better Tomorrow.
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I saw a Moth fly across the sun today.
- Title: Please Ignore This
- Artist: Indicrow
- Description: I messed up on the spelling, please look up "Blood Of A Moth..." to get the right spelling. Please don't vote for this, thank you.
- Date: 07/23/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- candi-crazi33 - 06/21/2009
- THAT WUZ THE BEST I READ SO FAR!!! SEND ME MORE
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- navdamme - 05/31/2009
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Incredible. I...don't know if I can say anymore I am so stunned. I am afraid that if I do, it will ruin the moment.
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- Lola stelladora - 05/13/2009
- It's good to know that u are a man of nature and u urself yearn when ur country does, that's if ur the original writer of this poem. It's very good and i understand ur comparisons between killing a moth and i soldier. We need to cherish the smallest of animals and creatures. Continue to write. You are my inspiration, you have answered my plight.
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- Rygaen Yuui - 05/08/2009
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I don't think I can actually find any words in english to describe how delicious this is...
I'm really curious to know whether or not the opening stanza is because difference between the Moth and the Soldier are becuase of an issue of proximity or not.
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- gaiiia policy - 05/01/2009
- kul,i havent saw a moth in a while... has any 1??
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- tyichi - 04/26/2009
- it makes me think to much. kewl tho
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- -SleepyPrincessRose- - 04/12/2009
- It brings confusion and intrigue into my mind that I can't describe.
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