WE SHARE THE LOVE

• Artist: Jose_is_MAD
• Description: This Is A Song For My G Friend This Is an R&B HiP HOP SOng
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: share love

Yeah Yeah Girl I Know You Feel Like It's The end. But know That You Know That I Love baby And There is Nothing I Wont Do For You Baby So As time goes Along I Fell Like I Lost You Cause I See That You are not Here So I Feel Like That I Miss You And The Word's You Said So Now What Do I Do Baby Talk To me Call me I Need You right now and if I don't see you i Will Lose My Cool And Go out and Try to Find You Baby So Now This IS the End For You and Me All I Want Is You To Be Happy Wit Me So This Is the End For You And me

Comments

[jazzii0000]

i lov this! it speaks to mi heart! kodos!!!!!!!!!!!

[PoeticWindstorm]

plz dont b too badly offended........but it sucks..........like, terribly, massively sucks..............i really dont like it.......sorry neutral

[Shadow_Incarnation]

no offense, but THIS IS COMPLETELY UNORTHODOX!!!

[tear goddess]

...O.o.....
Was this supposed to be serious?
I'm sorry, but you have a lot of things to work on, even for a R&B song, it was bad. First of all, it was not written correctly in the way of grammer. Second, Extreamly repetative = bad. Third, the order of the messages you are trying to put across are NOT WORKING. First you say she thinks its the end, then by the end of the song your saying it IS the end. Erm, NO. Big NO. Maybe you should read a few song lyrics and poems and prehaps you'll improve.

[Zuhukanah]

some words are capitalized, and some words aren't, in a random order that makes absolutely no sense. It all seems so... unorganized. Work a little more on order and I'm sure it will be better

[scitama]

This is difficult to comment on. It really needed just a few periods or commas and it would have sounded much nicer smile

[x-BiteMeGood]

this is so stupid 1/5