- Yeah Yeah Girl I Know You Feel Like It's The end. But know That You Know That I Love baby And There is Nothing I Wont Do For You Baby So As time goes Along I Fell Like I Lost You Cause I See That You are not Here So I Feel Like That I Miss You And The Word's You Said So Now What Do I Do Baby Talk To me Call me I Need You right now and if I don't see you i Will Lose My Cool And Go out and Try to Find You Baby So Now This IS the End For You and Me All I Want Is You To Be Happy Wit Me So This Is the End For You And me
- by Jose_is_MAD |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: WE SHARE THE LOVE
- Artist: Jose_is_MAD
- Description: This Is A Song For My G Friend This Is an R&B HiP HOP SOng
- Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: share love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The_Pharoah_of_Twilight - 11/18/2009
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really?
a hip hop r&b song...sorryy buddy but theres no song that lasts for 30 seconds...i hate abosolutely dispise it...sorry but if i could vote for it-- i wouldnt...btw try being nice to your girl and not curse her out... just suggesting - Report As Spam
- Hihara_La Corda - 11/04/2009
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its alright i guess except if you read it out loud it sounds like it was written by a red neck.
"But know That You Know That I Love baby"
"I Fell Like I Lost You Cause I See That You are not Here So I Feel Like That I Miss You"
you keep trying to make the song obvious of what your trying to say. Try changing the structure to make it flow better and don't try and describe what you are doing. Songs aren't meant to state things, they are meant to tell a story.
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- MeanyAllysin - 10/12/2009
- i keep running into this lol it's interesting...XD gj =D
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- Raakon - 08/20/2009
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right on man but it need a little work but it great
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- crydeathangel0011 - 08/12/2009
- this was hard to readd. haha.
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- Blood Lust 325 - 08/09/2009
- i dont get it but thanks for sharing
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- Intachi-Onami San - 07/23/2009
- WHAT? THE? HELL?
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