- As I sat, lying in his strong arms I looked up into the beautiful orbs that were his eyes. In these portals I saw two beings. One being shone and sparkled a brilliant white. It shone like a star and held its hands to its heart. It cooed a soft I love you and smiled a small but brilliant smile. It voice sang in a melody that it would never cause me pain. It looked at me with pure love and I could see that it cared. The other being however was a black as coal ravenous monster. Lange brass chains strapped to his wrists and ankles held it to the ground thought the beast thrashed and threshed trying to break from their grasp. It was clear that it lusted for control. I could see the desire and ravenous hunger in its red eyes as it roared and screamed, pulling at the chains. Compared to the muscular black as coal monster the brass chains looked weak and powerless. It angrily roared as its attempts to set itself free seemed futile. The beast seemed to grow stronger and more powerful at every passing moment and I knew the chains wouldn't be able to hold it back. Its was easy to see that it longed for control and would quickly destroy the loving being when it broke through the hold. The desire in its eyes began to grow as it screamed a loud terrible roar that sent shivers down my spine. I knew that once the other being was destroyed and the beast was in control it would come for me. As the monster screamed a second ferocious roar it began to pull at the chains. The seemingly strong chains began to tremble and break at the mercy of the tremendous strength the beast possessed. It was clear that the control kept on the monster would soon be broken. I knew the beast would soon take control, that the desire and lust would devourer the love and I wondered, would I be enough to satisfy its raging hunger.
- by Emi-Koizumi1600 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/26/2009 |
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- Title: Desire
- Artist: Emi-Koizumi1600
- Description: This is about looking into the eyes of a lover and seeing the love but also seeing the raging desire and lust.
- Date: 05/26/2009
- Tags: desire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- OmensLove20 - 07/20/2011
- very nicely put!
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- ll MissingCookie ll - 03/26/2010
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good good nice job mustve taken long to finish this
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- nfernal_Goddess - 01/30/2010
- i wan gold lolz
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- hfytdgtgsjh9ba - 10/09/2009
- all i can say is awsome
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- Chicky Lizzy - 09/11/2009
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it was so awsome
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- DawnLii - 08/24/2009
- zat... was beautiful. *sob*
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- bindyblueeyes - 07/17/2009
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oddly enough i wrote a short poem like this that had the same idea only the beast had broken out and was trying to kill the girl.
i would give it a 5/5 but alas "this contest is not open for voting"
would you be willing to read and comment on my work? - Report As Spam