A very dark day

• Artist: Invisible_ dark_soul_55
• Description: A little poem or story of a dark day I think would happen.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: very dark

stare A dark day will happen when were wolves and vampires and man eating mutans will roam the earth and not one mortal will survive. But I will survive and roam with the were wolves and hunt with vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day a very dark day between april and may.

Comments

[Slinkenhofer]

Maybe you're confused. Maybe you think poetry is what happens when you're too lazy to write a story?
Really, either put some effort into your work, or don't even write in the first place.

[vv7722]

Repetitive and predictable.
If you expand it some (give it a story?), or actually write it in poem format, it might be more interesting. 1/5

[DanteZephyr]

what the hell is that. it looks like a lame intro to a bad novel. seriously this is terrible. 1/5

[ii_Bambi_xii]

what the....no comment -.-

[Reaper2601]

ur not saying anything just because u put a few words together doesnt mean that they mean anything and this is pathedic and isnt worth reading. it wasnt thought out properly or even written right. i HIGHLY suggest u dont try this anymore or at least think about what ur saying and get some help doing it because u really really need the help...

[Proserpina16]

what the--??