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Dark pillowy clouds roll in
It starts to rain lightly
The thirsty ground drinks greedily
The dandy lions close their pedals
Their leaves stretching to capture the rain drops
Suddenly the lightning flashes
Thunder crashes
Wind lashes
The soft gentle rain
Turns to a hurricane
Rain starts to fly
Like many shooting bullets
The once thirsty dandy lions
Shiver in pain
As suddenly as it began
The clouds rolled on
The wind whispers once more
The air is as clean as a bran new day
And then the rainbow appears
The Glistening puddles made the birds sing once more
Everything is washed clean!
- by Lord Punk Junk Skunk |
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- | Submitted on 05/25/2009 |
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- Title: The Storm
- Artist: Lord Punk Junk Skunk
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Description:
This is actually a poem i wrote in grade 6 i still think it is a very good poem.
Tell me what you think.
Thanks - Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: storm thunder lightning hurraicanes rain
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MochikoMaid - 07/08/2010
- asif the waters clear just to see in its sprakeling pool!In it ligh thy story tho has awsomeness!
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- II_Fr3shsammy_II - 07/27/2009
- this is an awesome poem
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- virgogirl17 - 06/21/2009
- I LIKE IT.. JUST TO LET YOU KNOW GRADE 6 FOR ME IS ABOUT TO BE OVER.
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- Lord Punk Junk Skunk - 05/28/2009
- i am starting a blog with this poem and i am going to start writing short stories. So check it out today. andrewbarkman.blogspot.com
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- Pak Rat - 05/26/2009
- Excellent work, bro! Aside from a single spelling error - this is top notch... grade 6 you say? Let's see some new stuff!
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- planetearth237 - 05/26/2009
- well 1st of all... WHY ARE ALL THE GOOD POETS POSTING IN THE WRONG ARENAS! please post in poetry ur better than most!
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