- as i walked to class, a dark hallway stood infront of me. the hallway had been abandond for 6 years now, andallegedly said it was haunted by the spirits of the 6th year yr 7s.As i walked through this hallway, i heard screeming and the sence of fear stuck my heart like thunder.the darkness was blank black in midnight's light.the lockers rattled and i felt like someone, or some thing was following me. it moved as quick as electricity and stared at me with bright eyes shining like a tourch. finaly i made it to the creek of light andthe darkness seemed to leed me to the beast infront of me.
- by BR souljakid |
- High School Flashback
- | Submitted on 05/24/2009 |
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- Title: the dark hallway
- Artist: BR souljakid
- Description: the hallway turns into pure darkness during night, but stays the sameduring day.
- Date: 05/24/2009
- Tags: darkhallway
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hateful Sprite - 03/05/2011
- OMG! @ my grandmas house there is this abandoned part of a highschool and once my cousin and I went in to explore it (me and my cousin were cool and I swear there was something there! It was dark and I herad screams and stuff! IT WAS SCARY AS HECK!
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- Angelofrock09 - 11/14/2009
- At least capalize every begining of the sentence.
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- kisara666 - 05/25/2009
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I must say this is a good school flashback.
It's scary like most schools are haha. I gotta be a little bit of a critic, sadly, but you should re-spell some of the words in here and it would make it just that much better.
I'm gonna give a 5/5 just 'cuz it's still really good even with a couple of minor errors, good job dude! - Report As Spam