Soul keeper: Tastes of stories

• Artist: SMarks
• Description: This is a small part of a project i considered making a while back.
  Please tell me what you think ^^
  Please note: if you are going o leave hate-comments, then feel free, though I have no intention of reading them. ^^
  Tell me what you think would improve my writings and i will take your thoughts to consideration.
  DON'T FORGET TO RATE!
• Date: 02/19/2011
• Tags: soul keeper tastes novel death

I asked myself, ”Where am i”, and was answered by a soft, yet melancholic, voice of a girl, that replied to me,”On the other site”.

I turned my head, to see the owner of this voice, and saw the golden blond hair of a young girl, with a face so lovely, that i was at lose of words, but then. . .

I saw the blood. . .

Comments

[Peachy_Nova]

I love that you can write. We should make something together some time ^^

[SMarks]

lol ^^ Actually this is the only sample, the rest of the story is in my head, and i just wrote this yesterday ^^' To be honest i guess this is more of a teaser than anything else. Oh and this doesn't really explain what the story is about. . .

[skywerwolf]

not a good sample, but it seems to be interesting. You leave wayyyyyyyy too much open. What you could have done was give it more closure.

The way you put it just leaves it to wide, it's like saying "I'm thinking of making a soda, and it will be sweet with a fruit flavor." You have a concept