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tab So of course I was bored as hell, sitting in class with nothing to do but stare out the windo or stare at Ritsu. He seemed to always pa close attention in class. I wasn't sure if it was that he thought the teacher look absolutely hot, or if it that he really needed to pass the class. In the end I decided it was neither because, Ritsu is a straight "A" student and that teacher was as old as dust.
tab The bell finally rang as I hurried off to the hall hoping to get to Ritsu's locker before him. Earlier this week I confessed my undying love to him and all he said was "ok." So it is my job to prove the love I have for him by putting concert tickets of his favorite band into hid locker.
tab I walked down the hall taking long stides trying not to bump into any of the busy students. A few people stopped me or pulled on my shirt to get my attention but, I acted as if i didn't notice a thing. My one goal is to drop these in to his locker. After all that walking and ignoring people I finally made it to Ritsu's locker to find him there ahead of me. And you know what was worse?He has a senior behind him chatting him up.
tab So of course I do the mature thing and wait behind Ritsu until he done talking. And while I waited i glared at the guy until i knew he crapped his self. The guy waves at Ritsu and ran down the hall.
tab "well that was rude of him," I stated.
tab Ritsu looked up at me and didn't even smile.
tab "What?"
tab "I bet you glared at him until he ran off," he said dully.
tab "Ritsu would i ever glare at some one until they left you alon?"
tab "Yes you would you have done it before to teachers remember."
tab I stopped and thought about that time with the teacher. But Ritsu asked me to scare him off be cause he thought he was creepy. I redirected my attention back on Ritsu.
tab "So how do you get to your locker so fast?"
tab "I use my mystic magic powers to make myself teleport here on the spot." he said dully
tab My mouth dropped open as i stared at him. He finally looked at me and laughed. The first time he laughed since I confessed. When I saw that my mouth went even wider as he laughed more.
tab stop doing that your making my stomach hurt,"he laughed.
tab I i closed my mouth and decided right now would be the perfect time to ask. I pulled the concert ticket out my back pocket and showed them to him. Ritsu snatched so fast I started to beleive he has magic powers.
tab "How did you get these ticket? i thought this concert was sold out."
tab "It is sold out. but my dad work with the bands record label and gave me those front row seats," i smiles as i reached into my pocket "and back stage passes."
tab Ritsu jump up and wrapped his arms and legs around my stomach hugging me. I laughed and remebered Ritsu was younger than I am so I have to be responsible tomorrow night.
tab I looked down at Ritsu and frowned.
tab "ready to let go yet?"
tab "No, walk me home like this," he demanded.
tab I went to my locker and put my books away and I carried Ritsu home where he lived in an apartment with his older brother.
tab That night I stayed over their house because some ne didn't want to let me go home.
tab Ritsu stayed up all night talking about how he couldn't wait for tomorrow. I nodded and laughed while he just talked and talked and talked then I fell asleep on him.
tab The next morning I woke up with a small butt sitting on my chest and hearing cartoons. I looked up and saw Ritsu sitting on me eating cereal. i tried to sit up but he was on my stomache.
tab "You better not fart on me," I excliamed.
tab Ritsu laughed "I will fart where I like to, its my house."
:tab "Well could you at least get off my stomache so I could get breakfast as well before you drag me to the mall to go shopping?" i asked.
tab Ritsu looked at me and stood up. I walked passed him and whipered "shorty" in his ear. Ten seconds later i felt a glass bowl and cereal in my hair, the the glass made a ringing noise against the floor as the cereal slated after it.
tab I whipped around to look at Ritsu who was making a break for it.I
tackled him. I stood up holding him by his ankle carring him to his room.
tab "It's your fault why your going to be tortured all morning."
tab I closed Ritsu's bed room door behind us and put a sign on it that said "do not dissturb" knowing his brother always fallows the rules of signs.
- by LePlasticDoll |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/18/2010 |
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- Title: Deadly Trigger (chapter one)
- Artist: LePlasticDoll
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Description:
Chapter one from a story im writing about these guys (who are gay to let you know) who go to a rock concert and end up meeting the band Deadly Trigger. The two guys "liked" each other but the band members ended up prying them apart with their undying love for them as well.
The narrattion jumps back and forth between Ritsu and Yota the two main charaters as you hear their thoughts. - Date: 09/18/2010
- Tags: deadly trigger chapter love comedy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LePlasticDoll - 09/27/2010
- The fact that their gay isn't the comedy my dear.
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- J-Hoax - 09/26/2010
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Two things.
1. The spelling, grammar and format need editing.
2. Where's the comedy?! Is it the fact that they are gay? That's not funny!
3. (I know I said two things but I can't resist) Stick to one narrator. It's less confusing that way. - Report As Spam