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Once upon a time, an old lady lived in a little house on a hill. She'd thought of moving, but her cat won't leave. So she decided to stay. A few days passed, and her daughter came to visit, she found her mother on the floor. With such shock, the daughter left without a word.
Months passed since the incident, and no one knew what really happened until a young couple moved into the house. They found a little black cat, with a red collar that said "Spirit". So they kept the it.
Since they never lived in the state, they have no clue on what happened in the past. So the wife wanted to know, she eventually checked online for history. The link said, 24691 Indian Avenue, was built on an Indian graveyard hundreds of years ago. Only 3 houses, including 24691 were built on this grave. People have said that to these houses, demons of the Indian tribe lurk around for prey. Some say the even kill. "I don't believe in ghosts, they're not real!" said the husband, outraged. "Honey, I think you're just tired. I bet it's a myth also."said the young wife.
Weeks after they heard of the story, they wanted to redecorate the outside of the house. They tried to changed the gruesome red into a light blue, but the color stayed.
They tried getting the scratches off of the walls, but they also wouldn't leave. They decided to keep the house in the way it was. Although they thought the marks on the walls were from the cat, they seemed too high and thick to be that way.
After a while it seemed nice, but one night, while they were about to go to bed, the wife heard a loud scratching noise, a long with a scream. "James, did you hear that?!" she called. "Honey, it was probably just in your head. Or maybe a Ghost!" He joked. But the noise stayed in her head until she feel asleep minutes later. After an hour or two, the noise came back. This time, it was closer, and louder, and the both heard it. Woken by the noise, they got up and checked it out....
- by Psycho_Teddy_Bear97 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/25/2010 |
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- Title: Haunted House on a Hill P:1
- Artist: Psycho_Teddy_Bear97
- Description: A couple move into a house that was built on an Indian graveyard. Eventually they with they never did...
- Date: 07/25/2010
- Tags: little house hill
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- Psycho_Teddy_Bear97 - 07/25/2010
- Thanks!
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- Surr3al - 07/25/2010
- Nice. Great use of suspense at the end and Forerunners. A few Spelling errors but it was a good story 4/5
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