- Once upon a time there was a princess named Mizty, she was rich but not happy.Why u ask? Well when she was 15 she fell in deep love with a stranger! He promised her happiness and love, but after 2 weeks he left resons only known to the king.The day he left the princess cried and cried.She kept asking to the king "Where is Albert?!" But all he said was"I dont know" and leave.Today all she does is sit by her window and cry.All the rich men in the kingdom try to cheer up with presents and poems and songs, but none made her happy.Wait!Stop!This is a good time to tell how the princess and the stranger met!So it was a sunny afternoon and the princess(on a disgues) walked down her kingdom but then sudennly a person came running a tackled her down! After she got up he said "sorry ma'm". "its alright" she said laughing.Then the person looked at the woman and said "Oh goodness your the princess!"."Shhhhhhhh" said the princess."You have to leave right?" guessed the man."Yeah wait whats ur name?" said the princess."Albert"said the man."Oh no I must leave" said the princess and ran away.The next day there was a visitor at the palace.When the princess came to the door she saw it was Albert!"Albert!" said the princess surprised. "Yeah I uh came to give u this u droped yesterday" said Albert shyly."Oh goodness thank u if my mother found out I left her necklace she'll freak!!! said the princess."Well uh how about we meet somewhere tonight?" said Albert."Sure how about the Bistro?" said the princess."Sure" said the man. That how it was for the next two weeks until the day Albert saked the princess if she would marry him."Yes!" said the princess. When the king found out he was happy until he found out that Albert was POOR!!!! So the king arrested Albert and sent him to the celler where the princess will never found him.When the princess found out she was so sad she would not eat or drink.So now lets go back to today where the butler couldnt stand it anymore."Albert is hidden at the celler if u find him u two can ecape through the door and get away!" said the butler.the princess gaspes and thanked the butler and left.When she came to Albert was at she opened the door and escaped and lived happily ever after! THE END XD
- by Amyhert1236 |
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- | Submitted on 02/11/2010 |
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- Title: The stranger and the princess
- Artist: Amyhert1236
- Description: um this is my second writing story i really hope u lik it :)
- Date: 02/11/2010
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- SDK Manga Girl - 08/15/2010
- well it was clearly a very rushed story and it sounded kind of like a normal fairy tale with no twists or surprises. I recommend that you slow down to write an actual story that stands out. This is only MY opinion =]
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