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I looked to the paper, 'A Clever Lime'
Is what I said at that moment that day.
The paper was tricky, it's top back was sticky
But it insisted this game we must play.
For you see, it was green, mean for it's size,
smelt close to, but not quiet a lemon.
I did the impossible, laughed and cried lime!
Shocked, I stepped back from this demon.
Again! it's twisting my words now.
Which spawns the nickname 'clever'
For L'emon' and D'emon' Surely rhyme,
Will this madness stop? NEVER!
The paper! it speaks! it denies me logic!
But I am the auther of this tail!
Yappity Yap, it boridly said,
without my form, you utterly fail!
Tis true what it speaks, we should work as one,
and triumph as author and lime!
The paper cut me and scattered into the wind,
And with tears faded into time.
I wonder why, my Lime betrayed me,
an attack and then a fade.
A face palm followed as I realized nearby,
My glass of cold Lemonade.
- by Jelly-jar-sama |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/01/2010 |
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- Title: A Clever Lime
- Artist: Jelly-jar-sama
- Description: I like how it came out. I wonder how many people will catch all of the puns and how many will like it. ^ ^ Please give me feed back, I care not for ratings.... Though they are nice~
- Date: 02/01/2010
- Tags: clever lime
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Comments (6 Comments)
- xXKayleaXx - 01/14/2012
- So clever!!! Haha I love poems that are original.
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- Fallen Protagonist - 09/20/2010
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Easily the best poem I've ever read on this site.
Of course, there were some technical errors, such as misspelling 'author' and using 'tail' instead of 'tale', but that's not sufficient to detract from your five star accolade. - Report As Spam
- -GracedWithPoetry- - 05/01/2010
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OHMIAHFRIKENGOD!
I loved it. ^.^
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- Reader_Izzie_28 - 04/22/2010
- I liked it...
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- luvmeh8me1003 - 02/01/2010
- hahahaha funny very good i myself am a very talented poet.
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