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"Jake a-are you alright?" Melanie asked worriedly.
"Jake's not here any more!" bellowed a distorted voice seeming to come from Jake.
"then w-who is?" Melanie loved Jake and she didn't want something to take over his mind and body.
"Your worst nightmare! a vampire!"
"Vampires don't scare me. come on Jake i know you're playin' around now quit it before i leave." she said with a tiny catch in her voice. All her life she had known Jake and his jokes on Halloween. he always was looking for a way to scare her.
"Are you sure you don't wanna stay for a snack? my little darling you smell so delicious and i will drink all your blood in a minute."
"N-no you w-w-won't!"
"If you try to run i catch you if you try to hide I'll find you. we vampires are very fast and have very good senses. don't fool yourself child because you will die all the same. Now or later. Choose."
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
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THANK YOU THERE WILL BE MORE OF THIS SOON. PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT. biggrin
- by hannah rod12 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/16/2010 |
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- Title: idk the title
- Artist: hannah rod12
- Description: melanie and her very close friend jake are in the woods when jake turns into a vampire and drains most melanie's blood meaning he will have to change her into a vamp to. to keep her alive what will he do... find out by reading the rest of this next time...
- Date: 01/16/2010
- Tags: vampire story scary suspence awesome
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dark Evil Ninja Vampire - 02/03/2010
- ...... ^.,..,^ interesting.
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- Little Milkflower - 01/22/2010
- More details. I want to know the characters more.
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- Miss_Zombiie_Panda - 01/17/2010
- its okay but you need to work on it a lil
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