chased by the devil

• Artist: hails14
• Description: story about a 15 yr old girl named Isobella who is getting stalked by a serial killer.its only a small part of my story if thee some good comments i might continue to write.
• Date: 11/23/2009
• Tags: devil here

prologe:Bang! the pistol fired and it was bye bye David.the killer grinned down at Davids body.He was so happy now he could get her.All he wanted was her she always came into his thoughts ,invading his mind making him think of her. it was like a form of torture for him but that was nothing compared to what he did to innocent people.he now baried Davids body in a deep unmarked grave,evened out the dirt with a shovel then took a towel and wiped down the shovel and threw it in the samoan river and sat on a near by rock. He thought about killing David and how easy he could get to her now.The killer started to laugh an icy cold laugh.then he walked away still thinking of her .....and thinking about how he would distroy her once more.

Comments

[hails14]

i was going to continue but now im re writing it its going to be a whole new thing

[CherryFlavoredDeodorant]

now this is really good. Just needs a few minor adjustments but otherwise i couldn't write it any better myself!! I'm gonna definatley be a fan of this!! continue please?? : D