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Nothing is what you see #1
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Date Story #1
Sakura Shadow...
I woke up this morning and knew that today was the day. I got up from bed and hurried to the shower and cleaned myself up. I picked out my clothes a black and red shirt with long sleeves and a pair of jeans that I really liked, put on my watch and got my wallet, checked it and saw that I still had the 56 dollars that I saved up, I was ready for my date.
I called her up my lovely Japanese sweet heart and told her that I was on my way, she told me that she’ll see me there and that she could not wait to see me. Wean I hanged up the phone I felt a rush going through my chest and knew that she had caused it. I got in my car and drove to the movies; I was young and did not know that it was not a good idea to take her there on the first date, but who cares right? I told myself blinded by the thought of holding her for the first time.
I got there 10 minutes early thinking she would be there, but she was not. I told myself not to worry that it was just too early, 35 minutes passed, she was late, very late I called her and she told me that she was a little late. Wean I hanged up the phone she was there with the cutest pink dress, sleeveless and short and made of a silky texture, but what I admired the most was her smooth white legs, I’m a guy after all!
She came down and I gasped, but she was not alone her cousin was with her, the same cousin that had a crush on me for a long time, I did not really like her, she was cute but not a really good person.
I told myself not to care and told her how she was; she said fine and asked me what movie we were going to see, I naturally told her that she could choose. She picked a funny movie with some famous actors in it, I told her that I would get the tickets that she should get the drinks and light junk food, and she laughed and stood in line. Her laughter always made me smile and it filled my cold heart with joy. When I was walking to the ticket booth that was on the other side I noticed that her cousin was walking right next to me, I told her that what she was doing here on my date, she told me that she had to take care of her property that not even her family was allowed to touch me. I blushed and ignored the comment when I finished buying the tickets I told her cousin to go see another movie and handed her some money, bad move, you should always keep your eye on danger. She took it and walked away, I returned to my cute date and told her what she bought, she bought popcorn and a drink, I told her where my drink was she told me that she was going to share one and she kissed me on the cheek, that was a great feeling, her soft lips touching my cold cheek, I just smiled and grabbed her close, she held my arm and we walked into the movie.
The room was dark and we found a room only in the back of the room, she told me that she liked it better that way. After forty minutes and a few kisses I told her that I was going to the bathroom, I kissed her goodbye, and walked out of the movie.
After I was done with the bathroom I walked to the hand washing sink, but something was wrong I could smell strawberry in the air, I looked behind me and saw her, my dates cousin, she grabbed me and told me she loved me and forced kissed herself on me, I pushed her away, she told me that she could taste my heart with that kiss, I looked at her and told her to get the hell way from me. I turned, my second mistake, she stuck something in my neck and I blacked out.
A few hours later I came too with a blinding head ach, I saw that I was not at the movies anymore, that I was not even near it. I noticed that I can only see from one eye, I reached and saw that the other was gone. My first reaction was to run, but stupidly I wanted revenge from that b***h. I turned off the light and waited in the corner of an unfamiliar dark room. I heard someone at the door and I grabbed a broom and broke it to create a sharp object. Wean I saw the crack of light of the door opining grow I smiled inside, I ran towards the door and shoved that peace of broom stick into her chest, but it did not go as planned. When I saw the figure I stabbed fall to the ground I saw a touch of pink in the distance, and knew that I just killed the person I just met and cared for. Her last words were sorry about my cousin and she kissed me one last time. I yelled in rage and looked for the b***h, I hired a rumbling from the front door of the unknown house I was currently in. this time I did not wait I waited for her two meters from the door, I just had to hear her f***ing voice one last time. She came in and looked at me with surprise, she asked me how I got out, I told her that was irrevelent and that she was going to pay for my love and eye that she took. She reached into her pocket and took out my missing eye; she told me that she took it because I should have only eyes for her. I ran towards her and grabbed her by the neck, the sleigh b***h took a small blade from her pocket and cut my hands, I let go naturally, she ran and swung the knife again, I dodged it and paused, my final mistake. She yelled mouthy boy if you’re not going to love me then you’ll lose your heart, she ran to the side and drove that blade through my chest, I grabbed her by the waist and dragged her into the kitchen with my last straight and broke the gas pipe while doing so I reached for the stove and grinned at her, “At least I’m not going alone b***h” I told her with my last breath. I died, so I thought, I wake up in an alcohol smelling room with bandages and thin pipes connected to my wrists.
A police officer comes towards my way and says “you’re lucky to have survived the dating killers”, when he told me that paused and knew that the two people I knew for a few months and had the nerve to ask one of them out, was nothing but a trap.
I walk past the movies for a moment after leaving the hospital and wonder why did my date save me, and was she there to save me in the first place, and why do I smell strawberries in the air at this moment, I take my time to look behind me, nothing, I look in my pocket and I found a card with the sweat scent.
It said,
I’m sorry to have dragged you into my vice, but I never wanted for you to become a victim. My cousin told me what she did back when you where gone for some time, I ran to save you.
When you stabbed me you did not hit my heart it did not even go through my chest, I hope you enjoy what you have left of life…
Love sakura s.
What I have left, what does that mean I look behind me and see sakura behind me, I should still and felt a blade finishing me off the minute I come to.
“I really liked you, but nobody survives a date from the sakura shadow”
She told me this and with my last breath I tell her….
“My...sweat…sakura…”
The end.
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Title:
Nothing is what you see #1
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Artist:
gusasorus rex
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Description:
A story about a date, the character tells the date from his point of view, nothing goes as planed and the plot begins. this is just part #1.
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Date:
10/26/2009
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Tags:
nothing
date
horror
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