Broken glass wall

• Artist: critic-the-homeless
• Description: There is an never ending pit of dreames that float in your soul. Break thw wall that surrounds it, shatter it, and let them fly free. SO ytour sould will fly through light and love. And you will no longer suffer.
  
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• Date: 10/08/2009
• Tags: broken glass wall

Broken glass walls

Lucy slightly put her head on a wall. Tears from her magnicifent eyes fell to the floor beneath her feet. This so called "floor" is the death trp of dreames.

Lucy gasped as she cut her finger on the wall. She wondered how that happened. Not a single life form lived behind, on, or in these walls. There was one thing microspopic on these walls. Broken glass is what drawed blood from her finger.

These so called "broken glass" is the pain, and sorrow of the soul who of which cannot escape. Therefore the "Muyfis" or, soul crasher, trys to break the wall to be free.

Lucy howlled in pain as she fell to the "floor". All her nightmares flew through her mind. Sorrow, pain, blood, tears, cuts, and scratches. All broken parts of her soul. Broke the - now - "BROKEN GALSS WALLS"

And at that exact moment. Sunday October 21, 2000. She died, with a smiling face. To no longer be tormented by the so called, "God of death" or "Satan"

Comments

[UC Poika]

It was okay I guess but I don't think I understood it that well.

[LOL15000]

OH DANG!!! Wrong one, sorry. I commented on the wrong one...

[LOL15000]

It's really good but I found something I didn't like.

[M1dn1ght_Black]

that isn't that bad. T liked it.