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"Mike , why havent you touched your breakfast ?" Chrisy asked curiously as she cleaned up the house . I ignored her and started to think . Hard , realy hard . Was that just my imagination ? I thought . Or was that real ? But if that was real , then why would I have a dream about the mirror , and the dark shadows ? Was it trying to warn me about something ? I felt sick to my stomach .
"MICHEAL ! " Chrisy yelled angrily . I looked up at her . I was so worried about what happened this morning , i almost forgot about her .
"Um... sorry Chrisy , im just not in the mood to talk ." I told her . She stopped cleaning , and sat down right next to me .
"Whats the matter Micheal , you dont seem yourself this morning ." She said . I looked up at her , and thought about what happened to her in my dream , and I looked away . She looked like she was getting angry .
"Mike , you can tell me anything you want , im your only cousin , and actualy , im your only family that you got ." Chrisy said . What shes talking about is that a couple years ago , everyone in my family went to my mom and dad's wedding , but it went terribly wrong . There was a fire that started outside , and spreaded everywhere , and killed everyone . The only reason why me and Chrisy survived was because my father protected us , but he also died in the fire too . I started to talk , but a big shadow reaped over everything , it was almost impossible to see .
"MICHEAL!!!!!!!" Chrisy screamed in fear . I got up from the chair , and unknowing of my surrounding , i lounged forward ,and hit something .
"ARRRRGHHOWL !!!" It screamed . The shadow disapeared , and now I can see again . Chrisy was laying on the ground , panting .
"Mike , what was THAAAAAA-" A huge shadowy claw ripped through the wall , and took Chrisy .
"MICHEAL!!" Chrisy yelled . I dashed through the gap in the wall that the shadow ripped apart . I ran at full speed to try to gey my cousin back . The whole street was full of a mystic purple mist , that made almost impossible to see . Something grabbed my shoulder , and I swung at it .
"OW! MICHEAL !!! why'd u hit me?" A voice yellped . I looked closer to see I accidentally swung at my best friend , Randy . Blood poured down his nose as he teared up .
"Micheal , why is everything misty here? Seriously dude , whats going on ? " He said still whimpering over his bloody nose .
I had no time to chat , I ran . Randy yelled something to me , but i didnt care , I needed to get my cousin back . I heard Chrisy yell . I ran in the direction I heard the scream in . I found Chrisy , I ran so fast , my feet ached , my legs hurt , and I was panting uncontrolibly . I heard Chrisy scream , but there was something different about it . I didnt care , I caught up to Chrisy , and the shadowy claw that held her , and I tackled the shadow . It yelped helplessly , it droped Chrisy , and fled away .
"CHRISY!" I yelled as
I ran toward her . I pulled her up . I gasped as I looked at her face . THIS IS NOT CHRISY!
"Thank you sooo much , I dont know what happened , its too weird ." The girl started talking so much that she made me have such a bad headahe , that I felt like I was gonna pass over . I dashed .
"WAIT!" the girl yelled . I didnt care , I just needed Chrisy back !
"MICHEAL!!!!" I hear a yell that sounded not to far away . I turn around to see in the distance a girl getting tugged away from a shadowy figure . I regonized the girl . IT WAS CHRISY! I dragged myself foward . I was so tired that any second I could black out . I sped as fast as I kan until I reached Chrisy . I tried to tackle the shadowy figure , but it dodged , and sped away with Chrisy .
"MICHEAL!!" I hear her scream .
"Dont worry Chrisy !! Ill get you back !" I yelled . "I promise . " I dropped to my knees , panting and crying . I look up to see something flashing . I run to it .
"Its a ....... sword ?" I said to myself . I looked closer to see that its not any old sword . Its a purple sword with these weird shaped gems . I pick it up to examine it . Its realy hard to grip ........
To Be Continued ........
- by vdog xtreme |
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- | Submitted on 08/30/2009 |
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- Title: The Mirror pt. 2
- Artist: vdog xtreme
- Description: I added alot more detail to the second part , so why not try it out ? u should be satisfied .
- Date: 08/30/2009
- Tags: mirror
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Comments (2 Comments)
- vdog xtreme - 08/30/2009
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um , mike is 15 , and christy is 17
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- xXxminimagexXx - 08/30/2009
- wow thats really cool, confusing though, are the two people children?
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