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“Intro”It was early in the morning and the fog was slowly forming along the top of the street, settling. A car drive through the forming fog and pulls on to the side of the road. Two seven year old girls get out the car and turn to face the passenger window. The window rolls down, and a woman leaning across the passenger seat appears at the window.
"You remember what you guys did last time, right?" the girls nodded not much expression showed in their faces. The woman looked at her watch.
"Ok I got to go." The girls are still looking at her, sadness showed in their eyes. She looked around her.
"Go, go ahead down the hill." She looked around again She waved her hand shooing them away. "Go."
The girls went and climbed over the traffic border. As one of the girls was going down she peeked to see the woman but the car was already driving into the fog.
The girl caught up with her sister and came to an abandon trailer park. It only had six trailers in it; they were about the same size. The one that they were going to, its siding was painted white. But it was peeling and faded, the stairs were warped and the 2nd step of the 4 was broken. And the screen door was ribbed and the hinges were half way broken off so the door didn’t close straight. They went inside and waited.
"That's the last time I saw my so called "Mother". She didn’t come back like we thought."
"She usually didn’t come for days on end but we both knew..."
We both knew...."
“That she wasn’t coming back."
“My sis and I been left us as abandoned homeless kids for four weeks and counting."
"We weren’t hopeless seven year olds. We're used to taking care of ourselves anyway."
- by Animepandafreak |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/27/2009 |
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- Title: "Lost but found" Intro
- Artist: Animepandafreak
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Sorry bout the longnees im going to put it in part by intro, chaps, mid way kk.
I've had this idea in my head fo sooo long and Im really proud of what ive done soo far. So hope you guys like it and rate and comment my grammer suck so sorry too. Ive posted it in the gaia forums to but the arena's cool too. I would love it to be an book or/ and movie I would love that. ^^ enjoi
chapter 1 http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101598713 - Date: 07/27/2009
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- emmaispretty123 - 07/28/2009
- very interesting....I liked it! Please post some more! biggrin
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